Elizabeth at EBAFF, Bronx, NY

I am

an 8th Grader in Mr. Allison's New Journalism class at East Bronx Academy for the Future.

I have a lot of things about myself. My name is Elizabeth and I am a nice person. I love my family with all my heart they are the most important thing that I have in my life. I care about them so much and I wouldn't like nothing to happen to them. I also care so much about my education thats one of the things that are important for me. I love to sleep. Sleeping is my favorite hobby. I also love to talk about my favorite group called Aventura.

Some of the things i like in school is doing my work and joking around with my friends. I love hanging out with my three closes friends and called Flordalis, Ashley and Arlene. When it comes to work and passing all my classes I pay mind to it because I care about m y education. I want to finish school and go to college and be who I want to be when I grow up.

Some of the things I like outside of school is getting out of school and talk and laugh with my friends and then I like to go home and relax and take a shower and go to sleep because its what I like to do.

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13/05/2008

Space

I found a poem in Space, Issue #2 by Veronica O.

I enjoy reading the poem because it sounded good.
One {sentence/part} that stands out for me is “{I am my mothers perfume in the morning my uncles colon at noon}”. I think this is very good sentnce because it actually ryhmes and sounds good. I really like it.
Another sentence that I liked was “{I am from my cousins
Alize, Shantel, Moises and more}.” This stood out for me because it’s good to get along with your cousins and family.
I do agree with Veronica O that I am from my mother asking hey Vero how was school today? “‘What did u do when you got home?” One reason I say this is because parents ask things like that.
I look forward to seeing what Veronica O makes next, because its really good the way she wrote the poem. I really enjoyed reading it.

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