My response to Patricas poem

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an 8th Grader in Mr. Allison's New Journalism class at East Bronx Academy for the Future.

I have a lot of things about myself. My name is Elizabeth and I am a nice person. I love my family with all my heart they are the most important thing that I have in my life. I care about them so much and I wouldn't like nothing to happen to them. I also care so much about my education thats one of the things that are important for me. I love to sleep. Sleeping is my favorite hobby. I also love to talk about my favorite group called Aventura.

Some of the things i like in school is doing my work and joking around with my friends. I love hanging out with my three closes friends and called Flordalis, Ashley and Arlene. When it comes to work and passing all my classes I pay mind to it because I care about m y education. I want to finish school and go to college and be who I want to be when I grow up.

Some of the things I like outside of school is getting out of school and talk and laugh with my friends and then I like to go home and relax and take a shower and go to sleep because its what I like to do.

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My response to Patricas poem

I found a poem in Space #3 by Patricia.

I enjoyed reading this poem because it is good and it has to do with love.

One sentence that stands out for me is “Love is the greatest and worst” I think this is truth because love could be bad and sometimes it could be good. I think that there are times where people enjoy love and sometimes they don’t because it’s maybe bad or good.

Another sentence that I liked was “Love and life are like best friends that whisper secrets about you.” This stood out for me because I have best friends that I care about so much. Love doesn’t only have to do with couples it is also about friends and much more.

I look forward to seeing what Patricia makes next, because reading her poem really interested me and I would like to read more of her poems if she has more. I wish that I could write poems like she did it was really good. I think that she enjoyed writing this poem.

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Elizabeth at EBAFF, Bronx, NY

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My response to Patricas poem