Elizabeth at EBAFF, Bronx, NY
10/06/2008
My response to Danielles poem
I found a poem in Space #3 by Danielle.
I enjoyed reading “Darkness” because it sounds good and also because I like the way the person wrote it, it really sounds good.
One sentence that stands out for me is “this could be heaven” I think this is attractive because people would like to know how heaven is and its probably not dark.
Another part that I liked was: “I try to wake up, but my eyes won’t open.” This stood out for me because that kind of happens to me. I really think it do I don’t know if is dreaming but I be wanting to open my eyes but they don’t open.
I look forward to seeing what Danielle makes next, because just by reading this poem it looks like she sure knows how to write poems good. I think she did a real good job writing this poem.
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