Elizabeth at EBAFF, Bronx, NY
13/06/2008
My response to Meghna's Poem
I found a poem in Space #3 by Meghna.
I enjoyed reading To My Mother… because it’s a like a daughter to mother poem and I really liked it.
One part that stands out for me is: “She consoles me and enlightens me making me understand what life is She lays her warm hands over me her love is something I can’t miss” I think this is beautiful because I can’t live without my mother. I love her so much. My mother is one of the most important thing in my life and its hard for me to be without her.
Another sentence that I liked was: “Someone with whom I can never part!.” This stood out for me because like I said I can’t live without my mother. She’s there for me in the bad and the good times.
I look forward to seeing what Meghna makes next, because this poem is very good. And to me this poem I think she wrote it for people could understand what a mother is and how it important a mother is. I also think she wrote this song thinking of her mother and maybe talking about the relationship with her mother.
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